pawlakt's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[It's Winter]

not bad

I enjoyed the art style and the way the characters were designed... but I was expecting a little more story to it!

SkoolCool responds:

I acccord with you, I was focusing on animation actually, not in storyline. more storyline next time, same quality animation

[Midnight Snack---]

great!

it was all awesome... but my favorite part was the sound when the monster thing comes out of the closet... its epicly sweet!

KillerBDesign responds:

thanks, i wanted him to originally have a creepy squeaky wheel sound but the low grumbling sound worked better.

[Old OLD Project]

tv... wait... rock,scissors, paper, ... wait...

I'd have to say that this short is a complete waste of time... but I like it... It's the good kinda of waste of time... though the saying that came to mind is... wtf? It looks like a messed up dream... or an acid trip!

Giraffabear responds:

Haha, Pretty much. I just had a random thought one day and just decided that it needed to be animated.

[Oh Sherrie!]

Funny

made me chuckle and made my day a little bit better!

DOOMEDtoDOOM responds:

And your review made mine a little better, too =)

[Quick Madness]

not bad

it wasnt too bad animation wise... but I think it would really make it better if there was some sound!

Arthurtobastico responds:

my computer has no sound man, srry

[Adventures in Random-ep 1]

interesting

not bad... in fact, i actually enjoyed it! Some things that I think should be worked on:

More animation - from the looks of things, your an ok artist! so show us more. using more animation will bring people into your little world and will overall make their viewing experience better!
Color - although straight black and white can be used as an art style... in this film, it just comes across as, 'I'm too lazy to color my images.' Color also ties into the whole bringing people into your world thing.
Text - although some people may argue with me on this one, I think that the text in this film is not really necessary. I think that the voice acting was easy enough to understand by itself. Instead of the text, I recommend that you synchronize the mouth with the voice.

Some stuff that I enjoyed:

Drawings - the drawings overall were not too bad and I think you have a talent for it.
The end - (no i dont mean i celebrated it ending!) I enjoyed the joke at the end where the guy seems to shoot into the air for no reason, then fall into a hole which gobbles him up.

Hope this helps you and I look forward to seeing more short from you!

RedTsunami responds:

Thanks for the review. Like I said earlier, this flash was made in about a day, so obviously it isn't as good as I can do. This is just a lil' short, so yeah.

[Late For Something]

Awesome!

I love this short and laughed quite a bit! The only thing that I would ask to improve is the background during the running... If I'm not mistaken, the same house went by over and over... I'd love to see some variation!

Ani-Money responds:

Thanks for your comments! Yeah this actually started out with me trying to make a good looping background for the run cycles, which is why all the houses are the same. I'll see if I can vary it if I ever do a loop like that again.

[The Big Toy Book]

sweet

Loved the style and animation, but i really wish you would show off and make it longer!

ConAir responds:

My dear, dear boy. Only so much can be done with an idea like this, and adding anything else would really lessen the impact of what I'm trying to convey...but that's just artist talk. Thanks for the review!

[Through The Iris]

i understand!

I really loved your characters and thought that the development of them was incredible! I felt as though they could have been my best friends at one point in my life! You're right, the plot line was easy to follow... and boy was it FUNNY!!!

FantasyLuv responds:

Thanks for the review, I'll try my best to give you the greatest amount of possible viewing pleasure!

- FL

[Lost No Named Comic 1]

ont bad

liked the drawings... i had to watch it twice to catch the voice at the end, but i overall enjoyed it

FlashMakerD responds:

glad you enjoyed it, sorry about the end part, my recording program is a bit hard to use ^_^ thanks for reviewing though! FMD