epicly awesome!
loved submission and i laughed the whole way through! my favs would have to be the pipe where he is shot down... and the train pipe!
epicly awesome!
loved submission and i laughed the whole way through! my favs would have to be the pipe where he is shot down... and the train pipe!
interesting
a sweet art style and catchy music makes this flash great
great!
it was all awesome... but my favorite part was the sound when the monster thing comes out of the closet... its epicly sweet!
thanks, i wanted him to originally have a creepy squeaky wheel sound but the low grumbling sound worked better.
Animation... amazing
I fail to see how this is a comedy... but I thought the animation was amazing... attention to detail was also outstanding! can't wait till the next part
tv... wait... rock,scissors, paper, ... wait...
I'd have to say that this short is a complete waste of time... but I like it... It's the good kinda of waste of time... though the saying that came to mind is... wtf? It looks like a messed up dream... or an acid trip!
Haha, Pretty much. I just had a random thought one day and just decided that it needed to be animated.
not too bad
I think It would have been better if you had drawn the beetle yourself... or at least live traced it... but I enjoyed the music to it. I sat there and stared at the end loop for... like 3 min before I checked to see if it was a loop... kinda mesmerizing!
not very good?
I thought this submission was great!
I don't think you should way that it's not very good in the author's comments... It makes people want to believe that it's not good, when in fact, it's pretty good!
not bad
it wasnt too bad animation wise... but I think it would really make it better if there was some sound!
my computer has no sound man, srry
interesting
not bad... in fact, i actually enjoyed it! Some things that I think should be worked on:
More animation - from the looks of things, your an ok artist! so show us more. using more animation will bring people into your little world and will overall make their viewing experience better!
Color - although straight black and white can be used as an art style... in this film, it just comes across as, 'I'm too lazy to color my images.' Color also ties into the whole bringing people into your world thing.
Text - although some people may argue with me on this one, I think that the text in this film is not really necessary. I think that the voice acting was easy enough to understand by itself. Instead of the text, I recommend that you synchronize the mouth with the voice.
Some stuff that I enjoyed:
Drawings - the drawings overall were not too bad and I think you have a talent for it.
The end - (no i dont mean i celebrated it ending!) I enjoyed the joke at the end where the guy seems to shoot into the air for no reason, then fall into a hole which gobbles him up.
Hope this helps you and I look forward to seeing more short from you!
Thanks for the review. Like I said earlier, this flash was made in about a day, so obviously it isn't as good as I can do. This is just a lil' short, so yeah.
Age 32, Male
William Mason HS
Ohio
Joined on 4/4/08